Showing posts with label characterization. Show all posts
Showing posts with label characterization. Show all posts

Tuesday, June 14, 2011

Oh my stars I owe you guys a real blog, but until I can get my act together, I have to have to have to send you over to Kristen Lamb's blog.  She takes on the Star Wars prequels and schools us all in the art of story telling.  One of those posts that made me want to stand in my desk chair fist-pumping and shouting "YES! That!  Exactly that!"

And excerpt to get you running to read the rest:

Mistake #2 Heroes are not babies, and bad guys are not whiners.
OMG…I wanted to SLAP Anakin Skywalker. If the end goal was to make Anakin into DARTH VADER the greatest bad guy EVER…then no whining. Scene after scene of Obi-Wan just doesn’t take me seriously got old really quickly.
Yes, as writers it is a great goal to have flawed heroes, because perfect characters lack depth. But, I feel there are certain character attributes that will alienate fans. Whining is one of those.

See?  You totally want to read the rest, don't you?  What are you waiting for?

- Liz

Sunday, February 14, 2010

Valentine's Day Love Story




In honor of Valentine's Day, I've decided to post a very short story. This is just a bit of anonymous love between two people. I hope it puts you in the mood and makes you appreciate the one you're with, or the one you're wishing you were with.





“Oh my God, what time is it there?”


“It’s about nine.”


“In the morning?” I was confused.


“At night.”


“I can’t believe you’re calling me.”


“I had to. I miss you.”


I smiled. “I miss you, too.”


“Besides, I wanted to wish you a happy—”


“No!” I cut him off. “We’re not doing this, remember?”


He laughed, “I don’t even get to say it?”


“No. We’re celebrating after you get home.”


“But today’s the day.”


“Yeah, I know. But we agreed to pretend it’s next week.”


“I know, I know. 'The Twentieth is the New Fourteenth.' But I figured you’d like to hear from me on the actual day.”



“Today is not the day. Not for us,” I said.


He laughed again. “I didn’t realize you were taking this so seriously.”


“I am. I’m in total media blackout mode.”


“What does that mean?”


“I’m not acknowledging the holiday. No cards, no chocolate, none of it. I won’t even say it.”


“You do realize this is a completely fabricated holiday, right?” he asked. “It’s just the greeting card industry making some money.”


“Not from me they're not. Not today.”


“Well, if it makes you feel better, I haven’t said it to anyone today.”


I nodded. “I appreciate that.”


“So, I guess I just wasted a very expensive phone call to not wish you a Happy…whatever.”


“It wasn’t a waste,” I assured him. “I’m just happy to hear your voice.”


“Well, that’s good.”


“Hurry home, okay?” I said, blinking hard.


“I’m trying.” He sighed. “I should probably go.”


“Okay. Have a good night.”


“Have a good day,” he countered.


I smiled. “I’ll try.”


“I luh—” he started.


“Nope!” I interrupted. “Not today you don’t.”


“Yes, I do,” he laughed.


“Well, fine. But save it for the Twentieth, okay?”


“Okay, crazy girl. I’ll humor you.”


“Thank you.”


“But, I do. Just so you know.”


I smiled. “Yeah, I do, too.”


“Bye, Babe.”


“Goodnight.”



Happy Valentine's Day!

- Liz